This is a decent guide with some solid information, but it desperately needs a rewrite. The structure of the guide makes little sense, and you need to work on your grammar and sentence structure. I really want to like this guide, because a lot of the information I can see being very helpful to newer players (something I will touch on shortly), but even if you have good information, it is far less helpful if you have an awkward presentation. Your sections are heavily fluffed out and could be much more concise, and at several points your writing suggests that you remembered something and immediately typed it in without a second thought.
I also don't feel that the title "Advanced Reading " really applies to the information presented. I said that this information is good for newer players, and that makes it more deserving of being titled "Basic Reading" or "Intermediate Reading." It also does not help the credibility of the guide teaching "advanced" skills, when you open it by telling readers not to comment about other kinds of approaches because you are" being general." There is no place for generality when talking about high-level mental play, because in that kind of play details and nuance matter.
Finally please don't ever use "cause" instead of "because" in an informative piece. It's distressing.
I want to like this guide, but the poor presentation is far too damning.