srry my grammars the worst in the world but.
your standing still jabbing too much, not smashing enough you need to use more air moves, pressure with fair, don't use dair as much as you were, tilts was good just missing utilt and more ftilt. less dash attack and don't side step so much you can use shield ya know. why didn't you DODGE!!!!
other than all that I play instinctivly
heres the annual crap that I say to all new players.
the six "golden rules to brawllllll"
1. don't be afraid too switch up your moves.
2. read your opponents moves and movements.
3. space yourself.
5. watch out for stale move negation.
(forgot the other two lol)
dadadadada yeah if I didn't help that much srry.
btw no clue why the heck you can't post on my wall.