Double post for critique seperation purposes.
[collapse=Luco's Vids]Game 1
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Smashville
Roll less because you were beginning to be predictible and the Pit could have gotten more on you.
Nice kill on the Pit first stock, but play more defensely. I don't get why you were apporaching at that high of a percentage.
Dooooon't Dash grab, ever, it's terrible. Pivot Grab all the way.
Missed the Dtilt lock, sadness. ;_;
ROLLING! NEEDS TO STOP!!! It's the thing that made you lose that match and you honestly could have won that game.
Game 2
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Final Destination
Why did you CP FD? Odd place to go to for this MU because it's better for Pit.
You need to be more careful with PKT2'ing randomly. It hurts more than helps.
You were getting predictible with your landings on your first stock which led him to being able to kill you better.
Using PKT1 onstage against Pit is baaad and it bad usually.
This match you lost your cool a tad and he was able to read you better.
Don't Dtilt so close to his sheild. He was able to punish really easily.
More Nair in these matches was needed and could have helped you a bit more.
Game 3
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Final Destination
Camping pit had you. Just keep PSIM out and make him approach you.
Your approaches need some mix-ups in them, sometimes you would do the same thing reptitively and it would cost you a bit of damage.
SHUair should be used a tad more. In fact, aerials in general should have been used more. You seem more ground based. Try the air sometime.
Aaaaack! Quit going offstage versus Pit. It is scary there and where he can win the MU.
Rolling is your biggest enemy haha.
You have some nice spacing on some of your moves.
You can beat this Pit, Luco! All you need is a bit more refinement. This pit is goetting a lot of things he really shouldn't be getting.
Game 4
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*Side note during the Ness match, lol nice gimp and nice JV2 stock*
*Side note again, the second match was back and forth xD He ***** you, then you **** him. That was amusing and fun to watch*
NEVER, ever roll INTO Bowser, holy cow that could have been really bad.
NICE PKT1 Kill!
You had some good uses of PKT1 chasing in this game.
I wish you used aerials a little more though. :<
SD? xD[/collapse]
Can I get my Lucas critiqued on this thread?
Yes, you can. Do you have any Videos?